This device (phone) is broken.

Write about a time you broke something!

OR

Imagine that you broke your device or phone and describe how it happened.

WALT use different sentence starters and lengths.

To do this, I will try to:

• Start sentences with different words
• Start sentences with capital letters
• Use other punctuation (check the ladder)
• Show my feelings
• Use my senses to describe
• Include strong verbs

BROKEN        

A Man fell off a cliff, landed on a bouncy castle, went back up a waterfall and face planted on the ground, his phone fell out and landed on a rock in the water fall. He thought his phone broke but it didn’t. 10 seconds later he sees that his phone was going to fall. He jumped and he just made it (crack!) he heard a crack in his phone it was a little crack. It was in the top right corner. He was happy that it wasn’t a big crack. But his hands were wet because when he saved his phone his hands got wet from the waterfall. His phone slipped out of his hands and landed on the ground. (Clang!) his hole phone screen was cracked all over.