Tall Tale

This is my tall tale. It is about a real story then you have to add a fake bit in the end. This is my one.

I am blogging this because I put a lot of pride in this and also this was fun to do.

Purpose: to Entertain

I am learning how to improve my sentence formation

Success Criteria:

• Start most of my sentences with different words
• Include simple and compound sentences*
• Include some complex sentences**
• Has a beginning, middle and end
• Uses a range of describing words (adjectives)

Real Story

I went to the zoo with my family. We went to the lady at the checkout and got some corn to feed the animals.

I feed a bunch of animals like birds, pigs and horses for a while. Then I walk pass the ostrich and he stuck his head out of the fence and stole my corn while I was trying to feed him. It went all over the ground. When it happened I got some of my sisters corn.

After this was over we went back home and relaxed.

Tall Tale

I was on my way to the zoo it was so hot. As I walked in I saw an ostrich. I walked passed him and he bit me. It hurt really bad. So I just got a ice pack to help my finger. After that drama I went to feed a bunch of animals.  

But when I walked pass him again he stole my super hero corn from out of my pocket (The corn is really special because it turns anyone into a superhero and it gives you superman powers) . As soon as I looked back at the ostrich he flew off. I eat 1 bit of corn then I fly off behind him and

he led me to a weird location. It looks like it's the land of ostriches. When I tried to get him there was to much ostriches. In the end I could not find him so I fly back home.

But then one day he flew past and He said “Zoo”

Idea Words:

1.Superhero

2.Superhero Corn

3.Flying

4.Ostrich

5.Corn