Lorde Descriptive Poem

I am blogging this because I really enjoyed this task and Miss Plimmer helped me and helped me a lot. I only had this line right here I am a young slow working songwriter that likes red bull, now I have this and I also had to start it with I's.

My Writing Goal:

•  To choose precise words and phrases appropriate to the topic

Purpose: To inform

Success Criteria: (based on kidspeak)

• Beginning, middle and end (structure)
• Topic words (vocabulary)
• Different sentence beginnings (sentence formation)
• Adding detail to my ideas (content and Ideas)
• Punctuation that helps the reader (Punctuation)
•  To choose precise words and phrases appropriate to the topic

ELLA/LORDE

I am a famous New Zealand songwriter with a luxuriously deep voice

I am a young slow working songwriter that likes red bull.

I have a curly mop of long, brown, flowing hair

I don’t like singing other people’s songs.

I am a famous New Zealand songwriter with a luxurious deep voice.

I am a sort of teen you forget is a teen.

I am not afraid to be myself.

I have unwavering, intense, blue eyes.

I was sixteen when I recorded ‘Royals’.

I am a sort of teen you forget is a teen.

I have lyrics that explore classic teen pop themes.

I am 1.65 m tall and I’m eighteen,

I love my really nice friend Louis McDonald.

I was Born in Takapuna and raised in Devon port, Auckland.

I have lyrics that explore classic teen pop themes.

I think I've learnt a lot being a song writing.

I had success with my album called pure heroine.

I am making an improvement because of that album.

I haven’t been in school for a while.

I think I've learnt a lot being a song writing.